I got all but two of my goals completed. I'll work on those two over the weekend.
I still ain't ready.
10.31.2019
October (Preptober) Recap
Here’s my tally for the month…
Writing…
Daily Average:
655 Words/Day
Weekly Average:
3,560/Week
Monthly Total:
17,844
Goals Met…
Total Goals: 16
# Completed: 14
Mood…
My overall mood was good.
I had 4 bad days, mostly due to allergies.
Best Moment…
Plotting out my story using several different plotting
methods and watching the story evolve, grow, and get better than the original.
Worst Moment…
Seeing how many holes there were in my novel. Ugh!
Glad I decided to plot.
P.S. Yes, I’ll get
50,000 Words this month… And a whole lot more.
P.S. P.S. I still got
a headache… It’s even worse.
End of Preptober
It’s the end of Preptober and I ain’t even ready.
It was fun this year.
I really hate that I’m not ready and on top of that… I’m nervous. Perhaps, this nervousness will serve me
well. Whatever! I ain’t ready!
I still got a headache.
Let me lay my tail down somewhere.
The Plot is Ready, but the Outline Ain’t
I got the plot all set up, finally.
Now, to the outline.
Yes, I still have a headache. And it’s worse…
P.S. I never got my
Preptober Workbook. I need to find ole
girl’s contact info and email her. This
some bull!
Preptober Prompt: Feelings About Preptober
This is my first time doing Preptober. I truly enjoyed it. It caused me to think about things in my
novel.
Plotting the novel out really expanded the depth and breadth
of the story. I wasn’t ready for that,
but I’m glad I did it.
I needed to be more prepared for this endeavor, but the
first time you do anything is always a learning experience. I’ll be more prepared for the next time
Preptober comes around.
I didn’t get all of the items for Preptober finished, but I
want to do it again. It was an excellent
experience.
10.30.2019
Got A Little Done
I was able to print out some items, despite this headache.
Lord, my head… These braids.
It hurts to think…
I ain’t nowhere near ready.
I wanna cry, but it’s making my head hurt.
Preptober Prompt: Minor Characters Move the Story
There are quite a few minor characters in the story that
help move the story along.
They serve four purposes in the story:
- They share the gossip.
- They gossip is about them.
- They admonish someone about gossip.
- They get involve with the friends in some capacity of admonishment, reprimand, or restoration.
Oddly enough, the people who share the gossip aren’t
named. I did this on purpose because
most of the time in real life, gossipers usually aren’t identified. They’re usually called an anonymous source or
just a source.
Why Did I Go Get Braids?
Why did I go get braids today? Ole girl who did them was heavy-handed and
pulling like her life depended on it. I
got a massive headache.
I may not get anything done today.
Ain’t Even Ready
Well, my Writer’s Notebook isn’t finished. I’ve finished all the character notes. I’ve finally finished the chapter notes. I’m still working on the plotting items. I’ve set up all my blogs for the
endeavor. I’ve completed my goals, my
quotes, my scriptures, and my cover images.
My outline ain’t done.
That’s how I write… I need to get it done.
My writing space isn’t set up at the house, yet.
I still have one setting to write out.
I’m so stressed.
Never had this happen before.
10.29.2019
Save The Cat Beat Sheet Is Kicking My You Know What
Ugh… I’m not feeling this plotting stuff anymore. I’m having to rework so much of the
novel… It’s getting longer and
longer. It has more than double from the
original.
But… Alas, It does help improve the novel.
P.S. Did I say that
Save the Cat is whipping my… ^&*!?
Plotting Methods Used
I’ve used three plotting methods…
Simple Plot Outline…
Character, Status Quo, Motivation, Initiating Incident,
Developments, Crisis, and Resolution
Three-Act Structure
Act One: Opening Scene, Setup, Inciting Incident, Call to
Action
Act Two (Part I): The Choice, Rising Action/Mounting
Problems. Mid Point/Reversal
Act Two (Part II): More Troubles, Disaster, Turning Point
Act Three: Plan/Resolve, Climax, Denouement
Save the Cat Writes a
Novel
Opening Image/Theme Stated/Setup/Catalyst/Debate/Break Into
Two/B Story/Fun & Games/Midpoint/Bad Guys Close In/All is Lost/dark Knight
of the Soul/Break Into Three/Finale/Final Image
Save the Cat Beat Sheet it is…
Plotting Like a Mad Woman
I’ve been plotting the whole day. I must have been crazy. I’ve never used the plotting method before. I’ve just done an outline and went with the
basic story structure… Beginning, Middle, End.
I decided to be different this time. Not sure which plotting method to use. There are too many. Since I’ve read Save
the Cat Writes a Novel, I should use that method. I don’t even know.
So much has changed from the inception of the original form
of GOSSIP. It’s so very different now. I feel good, thought.
Preptober Prompt: Themes & Motifs in the Novel
The themes in the novel are interesting. I had to do some thinking about them.
They are:
Good versus Evil
To Gossip versus to Not Gossip
Courage and Perseverance
The Push to Stop Sinning
Revenge
Here’s some motifs in the novel:
Darkness versus Light
The Hazards of Gossip
The Power of Words
Self (inner struggles)
(Motif is an object or idea that repeats itself throughout a
literary work.)
One More Time...
After talking to a focus group, I've decided to change my cover based on their input.
Here it is y'all...
P.S. I'm not changing it again. :)
Here it is y'all...
P.S. I'm not changing it again. :)
10.28.2019
Last Week of Preptober
It’s the last week of Preptober… Oh my… I ain’t even ready.
I did work on some Preptober items. I did come research on my cover… I may have to change it.
I ain’t gone be ready.
Yes, I used Ebonics.
Preptober Prompt: Emotions of the Novel
This one was hard for me.
For the most part, the novel is quite sad and melancholy. There are moments of brightness, but overall,
it’s miserable. But, that’s the key…
Gossip makes everyone miserable.
It’s TENSE for most of the story. It’s also MISERABLE. There’s quite a bit of RESENTFULNESS, HURT, ANGUISH,
and DECEIT.
I would say…
It’s a tense miserable novel with a lot of hurt and
resentment.
There is some relief and hopefulness towards the end.
But, misery and hurt are the key emotions in the whole IDLE TALK SERIES.
I guess “Emotions” by H-Town can be added to the soundtrack
of the novel… https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ymj35w2hsCQ
View more information on the song of the novel. https://dboonenanonovels.blogspot.com/2019/10/preptober-prompt-theme-song-of-your.html
Preptober Prompt: What Worries Me About My World
I’m a little worried that I only planned out four specific
places in the story, but there are several other places that I mention in the
story and I’ve given no concrete thought to them.
There is Helen’s house, Mary’s house, Mary’s school, Angela’s,
Tammy’s, and Karen’s job. In my mind,
they are only there, but the reader doesn’t need to “know” about these places
in any detail. I’m hoping that holds
true for the whole story.
10.25.2019
Preptober Work
Graded papers mostly today, but did a little work for Preptober. It’s looking good, but I’m a little behind.
Quiet as it’s kept… A lot behind! Uhh Oh… Okay… Get it together. PLEASE!
Preptober Prompt: Sub-Plot Exploration
All of the sub-plots in the story have to do with
GOSSIP. Since this is the first book in
the series (The Idle Talk Series),
I discuss all the gossip that will be discussed in the subsequent books.
You’ll have to read the book to find out all the gossip. J
Also, there is a lot of talk about how gossip has affected
each of the five friends in the story. I
did this on purpose to show that we’ve all had some experience with gossip,
whether directly or indirectly.
10.24.2019
Settings Again Today
I worked on the settings of the story again today. It felt good to get most of it done. I have one more left to do.
Also worked on the plot and some notebook items…
Looking real good.
Preptober Prompt: Friendship Timeline
This post was inspire by the previous post (https://dboonenanonovels.blogspot.com/2019/10/preptober-prompt-character-time-line-at.html). I thought I would discuss the friendship
timeline for the five ladies of the story.
Angela meets Karen at the church.
Then they meet Helen at church.
Then the three of them meet Mary at the coffee shop and
invite her to the church. She starts
going to the church after visiting a few times.
Then, they add Tammy to the group.
Learn more about the characters in the story… https://dboonenanonovels.blogspot.com/2019/10/character-list.html
Preptober Prompt: Character Time Line (At Three Points in the Story)
Tammy Andrews, my main character has an interesting timeline
in the story. I had to do some work to
figure out how she became friends with the four other ladies. So, here’s that timeline.
Tammy meets Helen. Then,
Helen introduces Tammy to Angela and Karen.
But, there’s another timeline where Mary meets Tammy through
the Bishop (the pastor of their church).
Then, Mary introduces her to Karen and Angela. Which is interesting because the two of them
have already met her.
I did this on purpose to make it seem like Tammy was
supposed to be part of the group. I
enjoy doing this kind of stuff in my novels.
Learn more about the characters in the story… https://dboonenanonovels.blogspot.com/2019/10/character-list.html
10.23.2019
Settings Today
I worked on settings again today. I’m still not feeling the best because of allergy
season. What kind of weather came
through here yesterday? This some
madness. I had to take the full regimen
today, pills, nasal spray, eye drops, ugh.
I’m pushing through it.
I hate Fall Allergies.
Preptober Prompt: Romance in the Novel
I don’t really do romance novels or romance in my
novels. Most of the time, it’s in
passing or just enough to let you know that there’s some people in a
relationship. I’m anti-romance, so to
speak, especially when it comes to it in novels and movies. I don’t believe in “Happily Ever After.”
With that being said.
There are two relationships in the story. One is between Easter Jimmy and Norfleet
Page, III. They’re engaged, but going
through some things. The other is Tammy
and Nimo. It’s a relatively fresh
relationship. There are no married
couples in the story (as of yet).
Some of the gossip involves couples and relationships, but
it ain’t in the least bit romantic.
Learn more about the characters in the story… https://dboonenanonovels.blogspot.com/2019/10/character-list.html
10.22.2019
Character List
Here’s a revised character list…
Pastor Norfleet Page, III – The gossip is about him.
Easter Jimmy – She is Pastor Page’s fiancée.
Fiona Caskey – She’s the reason for the gossip.
Tammy Andrews (spiritual) – She’s the person the story
revolves around. (I coulda just said the
protagonist.)
Angela Hines (alpha) – She’s one of the gossipers and a supporting
character.
Helen Ware (comedienne) – She’s another one of the gossipers
and a supporting character.
Mary Regal (mediator) – She’s another one of the gossipers
and a supporting character.
Karen Valwood (quiet) – She’s another one of the gossipers
and the antagonist.
(Side note… I’ve never had a true antagonist in a novel
before. Well, at least one that I gave
the title antagonist to).
Evangelist Geronimo Broadneck, Jr. – He’s the character that
helps our protagonist on her journey.
All images created on Canva.com
Character Notes Finally Done
I finally finished up my character notes. Now, I’ve started on the settings. Ready to get going. I’m renewed today. Maybe I just needed to rest.
Preptober Prompt: Things I Like in the Story
I really like the settings in the story. I see the sights. I can smell the scents. I can hear the sounds. I get excited being able to write about them
and describe them.
I’m most excited about describing the café in the story.
I’m also excited about discussing the topic of Christians
gossiping. I am also going to give some
other religions views on gossiping to add a little diversity to the story. I’m looking forward to delving into the
discussion of the topic. I gotta make
sure I’m not preachy, though, unless it’s the portion of the story where the
preacher is preaching.
Oh, yeah. I can’t be
redundant, either.
10.21.2019
Just A Bad Day!
Nothing today. I got into it with a bee… It landed on my neck (although at the time I didn’t know what it was). I flicked it
off. It didn’t sting me, but scared the
H#$% out of me.
I took some Benadryl, went to bed, and got nothing done. I even had to cancel classes
Ugh!
P.S. I managed to
write a little on my synopsis, but not worth much.
Preptober Prompt: What I Love About My Main Character
Tammy, my protagonist is a lot like me. For the most part, she’s me. I, like Tammy didn’t grow up gossiping, but
as an adult, I got caught up in it. It happened
so effortlessly, I didn’t realize I was a gossiper until it was too late. It was crazy.
Similar to me, Tammy’s journey is the same. She gets caught up in gossiping after she
becomes a part of the Café girls. She meets
people who feed the gossip fiend in her and the addiction grows. Before long, she is engulfed in a sin that
she can’t get out of.
She realizes the error of her ways when some gossip she has
shared does some damage to someone.
10.18.2019
Preptober Pep Talk: Create Your Own Success
This was a rough week.
I gotta do better next week!
That didn't help much... Let's try this...
Yes ma'am.
Preptober Prompt: Best Smell in the Novel
The best smell in the novel is the coffee at Café
Ultra. I just hope I can do it justice
when I describe it. I’m excited about
verbally creating the mix of coffee, tea, food, and people. I may just have to go to a café to experience
it while I write that scene. That would
be cool.
I just gotta find a coffee shop that matches Café Ultra’s
ambience and scenery.
10.17.2019
Read Today (No, I Didn’t Finish the Book)
I’m still reading.
Trying to finish the book, but might not.
I need to get back to prepping. I purchased a Preptober Workbook. I haven’t received it, yet.
I created my own from various sources, but I want the one I
purchased.
Preptober Prompt: Best Sound in the Novel
The best sound in my novel is of course… the church service.
Those are my favorite scenes to write. I love writing and describing the ambience of
the service and everything that’s going on.
Once, someone told me that the scene was so real that she almost raised
her hand and said “Hallelujah” while the choir was singing. That’s what I want to happen.
Church sounds like heaven in my novel.
10.16.2019
Preptober Prompt: Character at Three Points in the Story (Karen)
I decided to go ahead and look at Karen at three points in
the story.
Karen is the antagonist of the story. I’ve never really written an antagonist in my
novels. Most of my stories don’t require
one. But, for this story, as I’ve been
prepping this month, the need for one has developed.
Karen doesn’t like Tammy from the beginning. She feels that Tammy is a third wheel so to
speak. Because Tammy comes in with a
positive attitude and wanting to do more than just sit around and talk, Karen
resents her. It’s kind of like… she just
doesn’t like her and there’s no real valid reason.
Karen often challenges Tammy, simply because she doesn’t
like her. There are two occasions where
the conflict is very serious and could cause severe problems.
In the end, Karen winds up being hateful and vindictive to
all the ladies, especially Tammy.
View Tammy’s Three Points in the Story here… https://dboonenanonovels.blogspot.com/2019/10/preptober-prompt-character-at-three.html
Preptober Prompt: Character at Three Points in the Story
I want to look at Tammy at three points of the story. At first, I thought about writing this about
Karen because I need to work on creating a meaningful antagonist, but I really
want to focus on Tammy.
Tammy is the protagonist of the story. Tammy is a fun-loving person. She moves to Collier City because of her
job. She begins to attend the church her
cousin pastors. She’s lonely and needs
to meet some friends. She ends up
meeting Mary, Helen, Karen, and Angela, who have a friendship someone set up
already, but because of her personality, she’s able to fit right in with the
group. The friendship starts out fun,
but begins to deteriorate once the gossip goes towards gossiping more and more.
Tammy begins to realize she gossips too much when some
gossip that was shared in the group gets back to her from an unlikely source at
her church. She doesn’t know the person
who tells her the gossip, so she tries to figure out how it got around and how
it got back to her. This is a pivotal
moment for her in the story.
Tammy changes at the end of the story, but she still
experiences the pain of gossiping.
Still Reading (Trying to Get Back in the Mood)
I read again today. I
worked a little more on Preptober. I
printed out some items for the novel.
Pictures are so pretty in color.
Feeling much better as it relates to the shooting.
I’m getting back excited about the story. Hoping to finish the Klaassen book by
tomorrow.
Let’s Get It! Let’s GO!
10.15.2019
Read Again (Still Reeling)
I read again today. I wrote some things down to get me back in the mood to prep. I even learned a little bit.
But... I'm still reeling from Saturday's shooting.
I got a student in one of my classes who's STUCK ON STUPID.
I gotta figure out a way to add the phrase "STUCK ON STUPID" to my novel. LOL!
But... I'm still reeling from Saturday's shooting.
I got a student in one of my classes who's STUCK ON STUPID.
I gotta figure out a way to add the phrase "STUCK ON STUPID" to my novel. LOL!
Preptober Prompt: It’s the Halfway Point…
I’m behind with my prep.
I’m tired. I don’t really want to
prep. I need a break. I really need to get my act together.
See these posts for more info…
10.14.2019
Preptober Prompt: Perfect November
If I could create the perfect November, I would be in a
cabin on the outskirts of the woods, not too deep because I’m scary. The cabin would be next to a lake. There would be no distractions of any kind
and I could write without any interruptions or hindrances. The words would flow from me like the river
outside my window.
I would be able to view nature from any angle of my writing
area, which would be fitted with the best of the best technology around and my
internet would ALWAYS work. Meal time
would be great because they were prepared by a phenomenal chef would knew how
to cook the food I like, the way I like it.
No one would interrupt me.
Yaaaas! There would be no worries
of work because I’d be off for the whole month.
Lastly, there would be no illnesses from allergies,
headaches, or anything else.
WELL… back to reality. I'm going to find a cabin to write in one of these days. (Got that on my bucket list.)
Great NaNo Prep Sites
Preparing for
NaNoWriMo: Your Guide to Outlining Success
This site offers a number of resources for Preptober.
Prep_Tober
This site offers a number of resources for Preptober.
Preparing for
NaNoWriMo: The Ultimate Preptober Guide
This site offers 15 steps to get ready for NaNoWriMo
eadeverell.com
This site offers an extensive collection of items for
writers.
From 2018...
NaNoWriMo 2018 Novel Binder Printables
This site offers a 13-page PDF of printables to fill your novel binder.
https://shaylaraquel.com/blog/nanowrimonovelbinder
Novel Planning Tools and Worksheets
This site offers resources for helping you plan your NaNoWriMo novel.
https://allfreelancewriting.com/novel-planning-tools-and-worksheets/
5 Tips for October Planning
This site offers ways you can increase your chances of hitting your NaNo goal.
https://allfreelancewriting.com/prepare-for-nanowrimo/
NaNoWriMo Plotting Resources
This site offers novel plotting resources.
http://thewritersaurus.com/2015/10/09/nanowrimo-plotting-resources/
What Is This?
In this blog, you will find the NANO novels I wrote in 2018 and the one I'm writing this year (2019).
View my 2004-2008 NaNo Novels.
View my 2004-2008 NaNo Novels.
Remember… they aren’t finished works. They’re rough drafts.
National Novel Writing Month
National Novel Writing Month BKA NaNoWriMo is a fun-filled month where you write a 50,000 word novel in the month of November.
I participated in the past. I'm participating this year. Let's see how it goes.
To view my past NaNo Novels (2004-2008)… Click here.
Read Again
I read again today. After
another shooting of a black woman in her own house by a white police officer, I
couldn’t bring myself to write or prep.
Lord, I’m so tired of this foolishness. WHEN WILL IT END?
A side note… I’m thinking about adding this to my
novel. What kind of writer would I be if
I didn’t speak to the current culture and events?
10.11.2019
Preptober Prompt: If I Get Stuck
If I get stuck during NaNoWriMo,
I will outline Restoration,
which covers Pastor Norfleet Page, III’s restoration after this debacle that
happens in Gossip. I also could outline Backbiting,
which follows Karen’s journey. Lastly, I
could also write more about Fiona’s relationship with ole dude.
I’m just ready
to write!
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